nearly there a few more changes needed the heritage wall in the red should be glass like the rest of the section in the red zone the blue should be returned to the same car park perforated screening on the right the green is supposed to look like a main street north terrace adelaide with a car parked outside the hotel on the left in the green and not planting at all in the green zone the yellow is a pedestrian mall not a busy car road on the right do not change the perspective just make the changes i requested the glazing in the blue zone must be returned to parking and leave the tv screen in the centre the pedestrian street on the right needs to be subtle not an explosion of life most importantly you need to change the heritage facade in the red it must be glass in that section to match the two storey glass facade of the hotel